Saturday, 28 November 2009

please suggest a title

you are the turn i can not miss
you are the line i can not bend
you are the height i can not rise
you are the destiny i can not mend

you are the doubt i can not clear
you are the puzzle i can not solve
you are the question i can not answer
you are the 'love' that i can only love!!

4 comments:

  1. some can'ts some cans
    extend it a bit that u can

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  2. Aree Baba Ri! Gajab Bhaiyya!

    Tumka toh sach mein isq-muhabbat-pyaar ityaadi hui gava kisi se .... aisa lagat hai !!!

    Jara humein bhi batayiye na ..... Ee kaun sundari bhava?

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  3. haha...
    sab samjhat ho...
    dil ka aks chere pe dikhat bhi hai..
    isq-mushq chupaye chhupat bhi nahin hai..
    phir bhi poochat ho...
    gazab to aap bhi karte ho...

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  4. beyond love, how could a lover identify himself? :). Let that identity be the title.

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